This is my rough cut 2 for my magazine advert idea. One of the changes from rough cut one is the centre picture, which I changed due to feedback telling me the photo wasn't very well structured, which I agreed with. I decided to use this photograph because it links with our video nicely as it is seen in the video. I think it is an intriguing photo and it will attract the people reading the magazine because it brings a few questions to their minds. The photo has a lot significance with the title of the song as well as you can see a male contemplating over something and he looks fairly upset, possibly even praying.
I also have changed the outline of the rectangle because feedback I received included how the rectangle was too shaped and didn't look right and so I have changed the outline to a fade to hopefully make it seem more suitable and appealing to audiences.
George Watkins This is my second rough cut for my magazine advert of which I have made several different changes to after receiving feedback from peers and teachers, some of the changes I have made from my first magazine draft are the fonts of all text which I have made the same and also made the text bold so that it stands out more, as well as this I also added in some social media account logo's to give the poster more of an advertising feel as having these logo's advertises to the public that you can follow the band on different social media platforms such as; twitter, Facebook, Instagram and sound cloud. Another slight change that I made based on feedback from class mates was to change the star ratings from the newspapers so that the stars and white instead of yellow as white fits in more with the colour scheme used for the magazine advert than the yellow which doesn't feature in the magazine advert anywhere else and also the yellow stars attracted the eye to much and they aren't the main focal point of this magazine advert.
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